I didn't really add special effects to the video. Although I didn't add the effects (like I was supposed to), I would say that what I have affects the overall meaning, mood and audience just because in almost all of my shots I showed things that I had to wait for. It's just that in my mind, I feel like the shots show that traveling takes time and patience. I had to have patience and time to catch the shot of the airplane coming in. I had to have time and patience to get footage of the airport. My mom had to drive us around the sign twice just to get a good shot of the airport sign.
I would say that I am not as satisfied with my results as I would like to be. I really wish that I had started working on taking the videos earlier. I was procrastinating, as always, and I didn't sign out a camera as soon as I should have. I should have worked harder on getting a camera earlier and getting more footage.
Compliment:Awesome B-roll
ReplyDeleteCriticism:Could here wind throughout
Compliment:Good rhyming lyrics
Beautifuly written poem.
ReplyDeleteThe mic was a little too close to your face.
The shots were very creative and cool.
Your poems audio was really good!
ReplyDeleteSome of your video clips are there for just the slightest bit too long.
Other than that your poetry was great and so was your audio!
great b roll
ReplyDeleteyou should put some words
great sound and rhymes
great job at the airport
ReplyDeletegreat job on the chinese dools
great job on the voice over
good lyrics
ReplyDeleteneeds back ground sounds
good visuals
The b-roll fit the a-roll near perfectly, if not perfectly
ReplyDeleteThe audio when driving to Lihue Airport was loud,
I liked the actual words in the poem.
great applicable b-roll.go slower take time to read. great meaning.
ReplyDeletenice audio
ReplyDeletegood pictures
nice voice over
love you visual poem
ReplyDeletelower the audio a little
great shots
Really great b-roll. could put text layovers and more effects. You read your poem really good and i like how it rhymed
ReplyDeleteNice poem! Really nice Poem!
ReplyDeleteThe voice over was a little choppy.
I liked the part with Japan :].
Did you go on a trip?
I love your b-roll and how it wasn't taken here on kauai.
ReplyDeleteYou could have evened the audio.
I like how your poems words were really deep and the b-roll matched the audio.
I love. Your. Poem! The background noise was a little distracting/loud but I loved your b-roll! So perf!
ReplyDeleteVery well written poem
ReplyDeleteA bit loud
Very good pictures
Very beautiful and good B-Roll.
ReplyDeleteWhen you were in the car looking at the Lihue Airport sign the audio wasn't turned down.
The poem was beautiful.
Compliment: I really liked your poem.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think you should've evened out your audio and the B-Roll didn't match all the time
Compliment: The Other B-Roll was really creative and cool
Compliments:The other b-roll was pretty good though
ReplyDeleteCriticism:Some b-roll didn't match with your poem
Compliments:I like the purpose of your poem
I liked the first shot of the lighthouse. I think when you are talking about Australia you could have found a way to make it so we weren't staring at the same shot of the map the whole time. Your poem was really creative and interesting.
ReplyDeleteI like the b-roll of the plane coming in.
ReplyDeleteThere was a really dark shot and not much effects.
The interesting angles were phenomenal.
Great shots!!
ReplyDeleteSometimes your audio is not very clear and it was little loud and you need music
Good job over all
I love your poem and the idea of traveling. When you said you would travel to Paris you could have shown the Eiffel tower. But your poem was very creative love it!
ReplyDeleteVisuals were great
ReplyDeleteNo comment it was great
Lyrics were good.Nice use of ryhme.
I like the B-roll, its cool how you have the B-Roll of the snow
ReplyDeleteYou could've balanced your audio a bit
I like how your poem has lots of meaning to it.